Quiet Poetry Lounge : Weathered Seasons

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Mar 9, 2008.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No matter what the season
    In any type of weather
    There is much more than rhyme in the reason
    why God decides to bring two souls, together

    Through a winter storm
    that lasted throughout the year it seemed
    You helped me weather the snow, sleet, and hail
    in ways that I could only have dreamed

    In spring how your gentle rain showered
    bringing such delicacy in every pastel flower
    In awe of my adoration and bubbly glee
    I'd forgotten how seedlings spawn such power

    It had also slipped my mind how
    a summer's steamy heat wave
    Could make sweat, sear and sizzle
    All from the unspoken innuendo you gave

    So I guess in autumn
    leaves aren't the only things that fall
    Cause I cascaded down into your direction
    placing me at love's beck and call

    There is much more than rhyme in the reason
    why God decides to bring two souls, together
    No matter what the season
    In any type of weather
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sounds like a seasonal delight to me,
    It matters not the weather,
    As long as we tackle
    The seasons
    ...together!
    You have a flair with words, great piece poet!!​
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, those weathered seasons can be managed much easier, together. Thank you queent for your gracious words sis.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and u said it best all i can do is relax in it now
     
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    Sis Watz! This was an awesome depiction of how two people can make it through anything when they stand strong together.
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gee thank you Rich, yes, go ahead and relax deep within it.
    Not easy getting tough as the going gets but, it's worth it in the end. Thank you LovesDestiny, much appreciated.
     
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    MRS. LADY Banned MEMBER

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    Sister Watz

    this one has left me speechless...... ^5
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "So I guess in autumn
    leaves aren't the only things that fall"
    Now that's brilliant as the orange, red, and golden colors of Fall in Love!
    You get down bad sista!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Miss Lady, I thank you for your gracious words, they humble me poetess.
    Really, Tha-Emissary? I appreciate your kind words very much, thank you poet.
     
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