Black Poetry : weather

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ladybug, Oct 14, 2002.

  1. ladybug

    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel like the world is still…. when I am driving in my car
    Through the bright blue skies… on what seems to be a never-ending road
    And the sun…it is just beautiful with its warmth
    I love the way it kisses my neck
    I feel the cool breeze wrap its crisp blanket around me
    And the smell…of the warmth and crisp breeze mixture with a hint of trees

    The weather… who knew it could be so compelling

    The way it grabs me in all that I do
    and even the way it determines my mood for the day
    This atmosphere I wish I could just bottle it up and take it out on days where it glooms
    Although those are the deep thinker days for me…so that also will do
    Because it is the weather that keeps me in
    Pondering the what if and what could be of tomorrow or now or just life

    Who knew the atmosphere could take such a hold of you

    I mean god the trees in the breeze
    Swaying as if it were dancing to a jazz melody
    And the birds chirp as if they are singing in tune with the harmony
    And the sun just shining as if it were taking it all in
    And the sky full with clouds as if it were there just to watch all of these things happen ag

    I mean the unison of it all
    And how it all joins together well

    I mean to me the weather is a lot more than I could of ever asked for
    So whether it be rain,snow,shine or sleet
    As long as I got the weather
    I long for nothing more to complete me
     
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    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladybug-Oh My God. You wrote every word and line just for me. LOL I Love this piece with a passion, as I love weather too. You described to a T all the things it does for me. I thought I was the only fan, in this weather appreciation club. LOL
     
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    yeah well the other day it was a sunday afternoon and i was on my way to see brown suger and well i was in the car alone and listening to my girl jean grae and was just feelin' it the whole vibe of it all and man i cant even explain it, i get so wraped in it i feel as if i am in another place in another time and dont nothing matter but that moment and i just absolutely love it...........glad to see you was feelin' it............i guess that is why i keep pen and paper with me where ever i go........i jotted it down in the parkin lot of the theater lol but thanks
     
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    tyght scribe u vibe here ........nice flow
     
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    you make me see weather in a whole new way

    so good to be reading you again LadyBug

    Welcome Home

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    ladybug Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for all the love and support
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is beautifull!! South Africa looks and feels a lot like this right now...we are in Spring/summer time!!
     
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