Black Poetry : weather report (in the a-zone) haiku

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Nov 27, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    for ladya

    "moist clouds up ahead"
    rain will flood her valley, soon
    quenching the rose bush...

    :heart:


    Alyce, (c) 2001
     
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    this should bring a smile...

    loved the symbolism...the way you flow'dit.:)
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful from start to finish.

    BE
     
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    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very beautifully written!
     
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    Excuse

    My French, but......Hell Yeah! :toast: here's to the elements.:D This is tyght Alyce. Thanks :)

    Madd Sistahly Love :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce

    I enjoyed every rain drop of this...very refreshing for the mind and soul.
     
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    you hear that????? You should because it's a thunderous round of applause!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:eek:
     
  8. Hunter

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    :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

    *nuff-said*
     
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    perspiring from the rush of heat produced up in here UP IN HERE.
    MmmAhhhvelous!!!!!

    weather report from the
    O-zone

    Onzhay
     
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    Bert Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is soaking

    girl!

    yessireee!

    BRB
     
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