Black Poetry : Weather or not

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Nahshon, Jan 16, 2004.

  1. Nahshon

    Nahshon Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It’s not about what happens under sheets (yet it’s so much fun)
    It’s what happens when 2 hearts meet (and bond as one)

    When we first met 96 days from July
    A Butterfly sang of flowers kissing midday skies
    I felt your warmth; the gentle touch from your hand
    While birds flew south; autumn leaves paint Brooklyn

    My love sought you through Indian summer heat
    I never asked you of your heart; so I was left incomplete
    Winter exposed its head, beneath the Moon of Fulton Street
    Passion overcame us; the day our bodies meet

    Winter’s blistering wind blowing down from the north
    My heart surrenders wisdom to travel a risky course
    I know where it will lead; I’ve been this path before
    You see me only as bedtime partner; though you I adore

    Don’t know your feelings, though bedroom antics are hot
    I am though right here day in day out; weather or not…

    Nahshon-Rae 1/16/2004
     
  2. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So sad and beautiful...much love to you for this flow.
     
  3. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yoooo!

    Ay that sh!7 hott! For reeal. Had read it to wone of them J.Budde tracks. like basement focus, backs tossed out cross the mattress. misstresses touches rushes of the atlas..

    *classic*
     
  4. Akilah

    Akilah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very bitter sweet... I sense the feeling of want... love unfulfilled... giving and not getting ...lonliness...resignation... This piece speaks volumes..

    Looking forward to reading more from you... :book:

    Much Peace,

    Akilah :spinstar:
     
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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gosh this is so deep
    all wrapped up
    in this flow
    Peace
    Blue :heart:
     
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