Black Poetry : Weather (Formations in my Head)

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  1. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i would sit by the window
    and let the sunshine
    flirt with the spring breeze
    singin soft melodies throguh my ears,

    but soon...
    rain clouds would push the sun away with it scowling
    he was pissed he couldn't shine, cuz it WAS his tyme...
    (spring is a motha ain't it?)
    the rain would come and sit on the clouds
    busting through landing on anything,
    that walked
    and layed
    and sitted on the axis of heaven....

    but soon...
    rain jus scatters somewhere on the concrete
    to let the snow cool my skin,
    soo it lets out a relieved sigh...
    snowflakes would try to break through
    my cardboard walls...
    but they couldn't...

    sooo they would just settle to make formations in my Head...

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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The weather does affect our moods, doesn't it? I liked the images here, keep them coming.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love watz...
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    very nice scribe like rain or shine
    flow on
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice Poem. Nice Poem.
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks fo the love mani glad u feelin my poem...
    :heart:
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    Lil Sissy this was a nice piece made me think about the weather and if it really affects me.I love rain though :lol:The sun will have his turn again tell him to wait:wink:
    One Love babygurl lovin to be inside your world:D
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks sistah lol, jus doin my thang...
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    very nice poem
    thanks for sharing
     
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