Black Poetry : Weak Man...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is another song i wrote...enjoy!

    VERSE 1:

    you left me with no goodbye
    i thought everything between us was right
    you broke my heart so many times
    but i forgave you after every lie
    it was so obvious that we were through
    but through all your **** u stayed by you


    CHORUS:

    so what is a true man?
    is it someone that loves you?
    what is a real man?
    is it someone thats true?
    through all the good times and the bad
    a real man can make it last
    but your just a weak man
    ohhh your just a weak man
    your just a weak man
    ohhh your just a weak man


    VERSE 2:

    i talked to you a few days before
    and you said nothin' about movin' on any further
    i thought i could trust you one more time
    but instead my heart was broken again
    deceit, hurt, lies, and cheats
    thats what i think, when i think of you
    weak
    i don't understand
    how you could just up and leave me


    (back to chorus)


    HOOK:

    **** boy
    how could
    you treat me like this?

    after all
    i did
    to make your life eternal bliss?

    what the hell
    are you thinkin'?
    or are you not thinkin' at all?

    cuz your just weak
    a man with weak strength
    and i can't see how i loved you at all

    (back to chorus a couple of times)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'kay u ready to sign dis contract!!

    loved it .
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm so ready to sign a contract, :)lol

    thanks so much :)
     
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    in due tyme for sure
    i see all this moving forward
    and how sweet it will be
     
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    i hope its in due time...because i've worked hard to at least get where i am...but i know God has a plan for me and i have to be patient...
     
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    yes sistah the moment shall come
    and may u have all the blessing on this journey
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwww your so sweet:)
    hopefully my dreams will come true one day...
     
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    indeed.... more strong men are needed... liked the flow and lyrical emotion... would love to hear the voice attached... til then can only imagine ya blowin... keep doin ya thang!!!

    peace
     
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    yep, they are...and i'm happy i found one...thanks for the comments :)
     
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    ****, this is a riveting song. i'd love to hear it on the radio!

    oh yeah i want a signed cd too!
     
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