Black Poetry : We?

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by skuderjaymes, Dec 23, 2009.

  1. skuderjaymes

    skuderjaymes Contextualizer Synthesizer MEMBER

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    when
    you
    say
    "we",
    do
    you
    mean
    just
    me?

    or
    you
    too?​
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said
     
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    Peace skudderjaymes:
    Now this was something to ponder.
    As I read this when you 1st posted and
    thought, the mind of that brother is so
    intriguing. Always leaving the reader
    with food for thought.


    Much Luv & Peace,


    ~4EVER
     
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    It was so..uhm so(and it took me a while to find the right specification, but i came up with) precise in probably every way you can look at it. Form, content, measure.
    This was definitely intriguing and something to ponder about romantically, socially, familial etc.
     
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    Hello Skuderjaymes...

    I smiled when I first read this. Often, in many situations some say, "We" with them not included.

    Thanks for putting things out there.


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:dance:
     
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    Master Poet skuderjaymes,

    In a nutshell...you! You say so much with so little. I loved this.

    Totalview

    Well this is my last post for awhile. I'm going back to lurksville and admire everyone's work from afar. I will continue to read your work Brother James. My hope is to work my way up to your skill level one day. Thank you for the lessons. (smile)