Black Poetry : We Sobered Up

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Jan 6, 2009.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    howard :

    so, will you accompany me on the cruise?

    Eve was amused, but confused at Howard's attempts to schmooze

    without his muse

    he couldn't have heard the news

    that each of them felt the bruise

    of knowing some other pair of shoes

    was more than willing to cruise into the other person's life

    or that she had refused to become somebody else's wife

    the truth of the matter was that she liked his booze

    eve :

    Santa Cruz you say?

    howard :

    uh .... huh?

    eve :

    here,

    have a Baby Ruth?

    howard :

    sure

    thanks Eve

    so will you go with me?

    eve :

    i'll think about it

    who was she kidding?

    she wasn't about to lose him

    again





    love,

    eve & howard
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Eve and Howard, still crusing on the waves of love. So nice to read you again, welcome back.
     
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    mizjoice Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who knew so many words rhymed with "ooze"?
    (Well, looks like you knew!) Good poem with an intresting flow....i liked it!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Nice to read the history of Howard & Eve again this a love book story made in Heaven
    love the joint keep doing what you do......and Eve too.
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks $$rich$$

    thanks watzinaname

    thanks mizjoice