Black Poetry : We should be thankful.......

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  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We should be thankful
    Instead of being ungrateful

    Had on your sunday best today
    Yeah all the old folks gonna have something to say

    Child hadnt seen ya since you was little
    I see you was the child in the middle

    Hadnt seen ya in a while
    Oh how you used to smile

    No teeth used to be here every sunday school
    Now I heard about you out here acting the fool

    And now you want to celebrate Jesus life but do you know what
    this day really mean
    Boy it aint about you coming in here all clean

    See you know our Father see whats in your heart
    Coming in here today I reckon is a start

    But let me tell ya son Im here to give you some truth
    You see God is the one that lead me to you

    He's calling ya why havent you answered his call
    Yeah he knows about your troubles and all

    And he hears your cries
    Leaving your poor family to sigh

    See God see all and he knows all
    But he's the only one who can pick you up from the fall

    I tell ya my Father been good to me
    Look at me boy Im well cant you see

    That the goodness of the Lord will carry you through
    and with his holy spirit around you will know what to do

    See its good that you accept the word
    and now Easter is over you want to throw him a curve
    Then want to question God when hell comes you got some nerve

    See son I want bite my tongue
    Because Im here to teach the young

    and old
    Cause I was told

    That he want us to live right
    and he told me to tell ya son never give up the fight
    and just like Saul know Paul you to will see the light

    See I see you sharp in your pimp suit, alligator shoes on
    Once the holy spirit hits ya you'll be blowed away on how strong

    the power that you recieve
    and once you get it son it will knock ya to ya knees

    Somebody gone and take the son by the hand
    And strip this mess off him its time that God made you a man
    and he want me to bring ya into his holy land
    Cause I know my Father has a plan

    For you
    and the holy works that you will do
    we'll help you to get through

    and he drop down to his knees
    and the hands and arms of love he recieved
    because when he was with the devil he finally realized he have been decieved
    and the darknes was lifted and he was relieved

    of the pressure
    that couldnt be measured

    because God wanted him to come home
    and he walked this whole entire earth alone

    and threw his hands in the air with tears rolling down his face
    saying

    We should be thankful..........


    we should be thankful for every little thing that we have in our life. Jesus suffered for all and we show our appreciation by striking our sista and brothers. one thing about my Jesus he mingled with them all because in order to be real fishers of men you have to be amongst them. he didnt discriminate, didnt chatise he said come as your are. and this is what my story is telling you come as your are. and see what the holy spirit can do for you. and in the end you wil be thankful for the many blessing that you recieve
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  2. skrybble7

    skrybble7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Go head preach then. I'm feelin' ya fo sho.
    flo on ms. poet.
    One love
     
  3. GHETTOAMBITION

    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hallelujah....thank ya....lol..naw let me stop
    but sistah preacha preach on sista preach on
    derrs so much truths in dat piece dat u got my full attention
    we shud be thankful no matta wut
    i luv it
    so flo on wit nonstop
    we mus collab sumtyme

    blackluv and bp
     
  4. Defiantson

    Defiantson Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    again good flow....
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    word up ...lol i love this speak on sis say it say it say it !!!!!
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All I can say is amen
     
  7. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    to my Poetic Brotha thanks for showing this crazy woman some love

    to Rich thanks for the love shown

    to Ghettoambittion its just the preaching in me Father a preacher i guess its in the blood

    To simplepoet thanks for the love shown

    to my fine papi thanks for showing this peach some love.
    :smooch: :smooch:
     
  8. abstract219

    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    so true so true...excellent drop, nice stanzas...i really enjoyed it and learned some gratitude along the way.
     
  9. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks abstract for the lovely reply you made to me.:number1:
     
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