Black Poetry : We Should Be Seven

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  1. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We Should Be ... Seven, Seven

    We Should Be... Seven, Seven



    Rain on our face,
    Yesterday in our ears
    Playin in front yards - yours, mine and theirs

    Laughter as a language,
    our friends are our lives
    young skin - young hearts that both heal in no time

    We Should Be ... Seven, Seven
    We Should Be... Seven, Seven


    That sky is my ceiling,
    Those trees are my walls
    everybody in between is family for all

    Pride is not an issue,
    Word processing w/ a pencil
    Our mothers sing us to sleep to relax the mental

    Street lights are care givers
    We talk, play and run
    boys and girls lookin hard - pickin out they favorite one

    We strategize and plan on how to get that first kiss
    Nervous when it happen
    Still feel it days after

    We Should Be ... Seven, Seven
    We Should Be ... Seven, Seven

    No one ever moves away, gets replaced or feels hate
    Emotions have no filters - we mean what we say
    Red light, Green light - mother may I dance


    "Come inside - you're 25, the answer is 'no you can't' "
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol this conjured up some memories.
    Thanx for the fun read!
    Peace to ya!
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    alright!

    "We strategize and plan on how to get that first kiss"

    feelin' this flow

    one

    pd

    :heart:
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lil' brother,

    This was a nice peace. To echo what was mentioned earlier, this brought back memories. Thanx. Keep scribing bruh.
     
  5. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all ----

    It was just for the youth of life - thanks for the words.

    My Crew - The Renaissance,
    we are going through some changes.

    One of us is moving away ,
    some of us don't get along that well
    and hurt feelings are raw and somewhat un-attended to...

    This was just me wishing to return
    to simpler times...

    I NEVER wanted to grow up yo - i just didn't .
     
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    diva08 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    made me think from the title.... seven... the number of perfection and completion.
    alright now.

    d
     
  7. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That's why i said seven instead of 8 or 9 etc.
     
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    YEAH, THIS WAS NICE...I DREAM ABOUT THOSE DAYS ALL THE TIME...NOW THAT'S FREEDOM.
     
  9. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Royal T - do you work for Syleena ?
     
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