Black Poetry : ...we never met

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Oct 17, 2002.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes it's hard to understand how
    friendships can be developed over phone
    calls or digital transmission submissions

    it's even harder to understand how
    it seems to be REAL. We know that REAL
    friends are hard to come by

    but your words are food for my life
    the hands that hold my lungs and protects
    them so I can breathe peace

    they hold me above the clouds
    and let's me see lands I've never been
    dreams that are within reach

    even when my arms seem too short
    or my mind to chaotic to accept the reality
    that life's gone get better

    If it wasn't blasphemous I'd call you God
    and worship what your words build inside me /
    what it incites within me / a scribe thought once lost

    forever.

    Even though we haven't met we will /
    and laugh about the "good ole days"
    even though by relative standards our friendship

    has been short.

    and we'll sip on Peach soda and eat pecan pie
    and just converse what is on the other side
    of the technicolor rainbow.

    (c) Verb 2002
     
  2. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    garrison.


    ahhh... you do be knowin' how to move a sistah
    first thing in the mornin'. :) anybody who knows
    me... i mean... Real-ly knows me... knows that i
    love me some BLakVeRb & that ain't neva g'on
    change... &

    "even though we haven't met... we will"
    it's as inevitable as death is certain for anything
    that lives & breathes, chile!! & that's all imma
    say! :D

    itsallLove! (4Eva!)

    elayne.
     
  3. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice vibe here
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed verb ya vibing strong flow head on bruh!
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow!!! a very nice expression Poet..well done

    BE
     
  6. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm lovin this peice!

    "and we'll sip on Peach soda and eat pecan pie
    and just converse what is on the other side
    of the technicolor rainbow. "
     
  7. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is no less than remarkable -- i've lived those words you speak big bro - i've lived 'em , and been scorned, and been questioned -- but most of all ,, i was held by that person's warm embrace through that technicolor rainbow for sure !!!

    this was remarkable.


    A blueprint for non believers
     
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