Black Poetry : We Live To Die!

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Death is merely a release for
    the soul to meet it's true
    destination......The finality
    of living is a daily observation
    We begin the journey
    with the first breath
    and no mortal man
    can escape physical death.
    But, the spirit within can
    live again, and again!
    BJS (C)2001
     
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    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was really Good!
     
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    simply put, that's truth.
    good thoughts.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    again & again

    through & through !
    da soul of man lives
    com'on poetress write dem wordz gurl!;)
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANK YOU GENTLEMEN OF DESTEE!

    Thanks for you kind and encouraging words.
    Keep reading and scribing and enjoy all the
    vibing!

    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes, you are right. thank you for this piece, dear poetess.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    MSB - i lovedided it

    we live to die
    but when i do don't cry
    just know i wanted to know - why?
    we lived a partial lie
    from the immaculate birth
    to the ride the black hearse
    under the deep blue skies

    you say the spirit goes eternal but under what manifestation
    can i get a conformation
    how will your entity exist under the present state of the situation
    so i continue my sojourn of the righteous
    i sure would like to know so i stay waiting


    >DSSNY<
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Soja and Lister

    I wrote this poem during my recent loss of my Aunt whom I loved
    dearly, I realize lots of people don't like to scribe and vibe about death and dying, but like taxes it's the one thing you can be sure of that we all must do.......How we manifest our sojourn into eternity is soulfully up to me and you!
    Live life with few regrets, live to your true potential, accept your destiny and go forth!
    BLESSINGS ON YOUR HOUSES!
    LOVE ALWAYS MS.LB
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gotta let you know

    This was really nice.

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
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    emax Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Much props for this one. It seems the more it means the deeper the thought. I can really relate to this one, having lost close ones myself


    Enjoy your holiday


    K,P&W
     
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