Black Poetry : ...We...Had...Sex

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MapleXtract, Jan 16, 2002.

  1. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All...
    that I ever thought
    I needed
    and wanted,
    in a "relat.sunk-ship"
    (relatively sunk ship),
    I thought
    I had found
    in him...

    We...
    did what we did
    and when we did it
    we did it
    so well,
    that I found myself
    always wanting to
    do it
    with him.

    Had...
    I known then
    what I know now,
    we could have
    concentrated less on it,
    and more on us,
    me and him
    ('he and I' just didn't seem to flow well,
    in the grand scheme of things).

    Was...
    I "in love"?
    Or "in love with the idea
    of being in love"?
    Not really.
    I guess, what I
    really did love, were the 'strings'
    that weren't attached,
    from me to him.

    Sex...
    was the (elmer's) glue
    that held our
    (jointed) "relation's hip" together.
    But conversation (or lack thereof)
    H2Oed it- at gun point- robbing it
    of it's sticky potency, leaving me not a trace
    of him...

    All...
    We...
    Had...
    Was...
    Sex...
     
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    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you had sex

    and more....how else would you be able to scribe this heartfelt flow?

    This is delicious, my MaplyXtracted sista! Love it when I can "feel" it, too!

    thank you!

    a
     
  3. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love It!!!

    Girl, this was on fire!!! "relation's hip"? That is absolute genius!
    I've been watchin, and you have become one of my favs!
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maple,

    Deep and creatively scribed.

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maple.


    (okay sis... gimme back my notebook!! :lol: )

    this is off da chain mane!! (LOL) serious-ly...
    i am more & more impressed with your talents
    EVERY time i read you!! ****!!

    :heart:
    SunShyne~
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maple...

    Outstanding!
     
  7. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My family...

    Ms. A- All I have to 'say' is:
    what would I do without you, ma?
    I appreciate you, more than you know,
    sis...:jumping:

    Dani- Ya fav? Awww man, you
    done got a sistah to blushin' :blush:, poet.
    It is, so much more, than an honor to
    be considered a favorite. I can't even
    thank you enough for the read, ma...:D

    Coco-Thanx for feelin' me
    on this one, sis. It was just one
    of those girlie moments, ya know,
    when we sit back and reflect. "Madd
    Sistahly Love" right back atcha...:D

    Big Sis (in da house)- I know
    you told me not to go in ya room
    and steal ya journal, but what are
    little sisters for? :D

    My Gentleman of Quality- You're
    soooo good to me :kiss:... thank you, pa...:D
     
  8. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see the little blue frownie face....

    but uh, I likeded what you had said you had did with the brotha!

    This is more than most EVER get, my sista! Dag!

    Tee-ight!

    T
     
  9. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    More than...

    most get, huh? You
    caught me off guard
    with that one...:D

    On a more serious note
    though, I feel that if
    there isn't really much
    conversation (you know
    that 'mental stimulation'),
    when the sex begins
    to get a little less spectacular
    (and it does happen), there's
    really nothing left of the
    relationship, ya know?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow !! all ya did was it

    well scribe sis.....but it's real when u just do it
    without the notion of know da true soul as one
    get lose in da myth of sexuality........tyght flow :)