Black Poetry : ...we...had...sex... (inspired by this queen, MapleXtract) much love.

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we.. had.. sex
    sex.. had.. us interlocked in the confining chambers of hell and heaven with no code to exit
    sex.. had.. us calling each other having others in our lives
    pain and pleasure were playing tug- of- war with our emotions
    and pleasure was kicking pain's ***..
    sex.. had.. me
    telling you my pain of her of me now sex has me telling my pain of we
    sex.. had.. you
    unveiling your true thoughts of me and it was strange for i never thought my mind could change about her until now
    tell me how..

    we.. had.. sex
    no
    sex.. had.. us
    no
    we.. have something more than what we've bargained for
    i hate to see you walk out of my door and i want to say
    don't leave but we know you can't stay but the next day.....

    we.. had.. sex
    mind ~~ then body~~ then soul
    lack of our direction is taking its toll for we know soon there will be no affection
    and i can't bear to see you
    only if i could free you from the pain you're causing me.

    kiss and don't tell we promised we wouldn't tell and we sealed it with a kiss and a **** what the **** is this a game of see saw
    we saw each other last night again and promised to never see each other again??
    but then...

    you said " we should stop, but it's good "
    "i know we should" i said while she lay ever so befitting in my bed
    then she leaned her head towards mine and whispered in my ear
    " i know i shouldn't be here
    this time with a tear as she cried

    love is now become a place to hide....

    we had sex
    no
    sex had us
    no
    we had more.
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feelin all of this....

    loving the repitition of the line..."sex had us"....

    well....

    a
     
  3. MapleXtract

    MapleXtract Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I suddenly...

    ...got shy, while I
    was reading this piece J.
    I didn't think anyone could
    get that outta me. This is
    amazing. Did lil' ol' me
    inspire this wonderf(illed)
    piece of poetry?
    So... we... had... sex, huh? :laugh:
    I'm feelin' it, and lovin' it
    so much more than
    you know (you're gonna
    have to stop doin' this to
    me, I'm runnin' outta cheeks :blush: )
     
  4. poeticdelight

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    sex...

    got the best of you ;)

    this was excellent as always poet

    peace

    *back to the books*

    got a class at 2
     
  5. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ummhmmmm

    lip smacking good!

    Loving the way we have sex and let it have us, too.... be sooo good!

    T
     
  6. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Interesting twist. I enjoyed the read

    Madd Sistahly Love
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  7. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ms. A,
    thanx queen for your presence

    pd,
    print this and take it to class with you :wink:
    no better yet, take the upcoming "private audition"
    endlessly your boy.

    T,
    good/bad- / <----------- represents the thin line
    thanx for the read.

    coco,
    i'm glad you injoyed it.
    thanx ma.

    MapleXtract,
    ah girrirl you make me wanna cry :crying:
    you know you're one of my favs in this whole joynt ma
    i like the way you made
    me seXtract this piece queen.... keep doin' it your way aight?

    *mo' cheeks mo cheeks mooree*

    me...

    peaccccce
     
  8. Luver2B

    Luver2B Active Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for augmenting my vocabulary about the physical relationship that one can discover. That was tight, definitely tight.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop and well felt on this one
     
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    WOW A POETIC MASTERPIECE FLO ON WITH YA BAD SELF
     
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