Black Poetry : WE GOTTA GET YOU A CHICK!

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  1. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Ya'll quiet down over there
    So I can start to think
    We gotta do something for my man
    That'll get him in the pink

    We gotta get him something
    That'll fill him full of cheer
    "How 'bout getting him high
    off a case of cold beer?"
    Naw man
    We gotta get him something
    that's gonna pick him up real quick
    We gotta get him a chick!
    We gotta get him a chick!


    Now that we've settled that
    Here's what we gonna do
    We going out on the town
    and find a girl for you

    How about a little small one
    or an amazon big and tall
    "Why dont we let him decide?
    It's his choice after all! "

    We gonna get you a woman
    that'll lay it on nice and thick
    We gotta get you a chick!
    We gotta get you a chick!


    Didnt you know that a woman
    is just like bacon and eggs
    Just gotta go out and eat em up!
    "How 'bout the one with the big legs?"

    We're just trying to help you man
    So you wont end up all alone
    By the way, you smell kinda brassy
    Here put on some of my cologne

    If you want to get a woman
    You gotta be looking slick!
    "Woooo! That's the one I want!"
    " Naw man, that's my sister "


    by kemetstry
     
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    Ikoro Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A most enjoyable read, Brother poet. The ending especially was most delightful. Nice and easy flow. I like.

    Give thanks for sharing.

    One.

    ~Ikoro
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man what a scribe that had me side wineding and the end shook me good
    truely enjoyed this piece now i gotta get me a chick
     
  4. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Poetry can and should be fun. Thanx :coffee: :welldone:
     
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    ... tooo funny..

    get that man a chizzickk!!
     
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    SWEET as it gets!
     
  7. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Hey stranger


    Where have you been hiding? :coffee:
     
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    twision Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice and refreshing!!!!!

    I like when the lighter side of poetry is shown.
    This piece was skillfully laid out....very cool twisit!
    Thanks for reminding us that poetry doesn't have to always be so 'heavy'.
    Appreciating your skill!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Peace and Love
    twision
     
  9. Kemetstry

    Kemetstry going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    You're Welcome

    I hope that more will know that poetry can be fun
     
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    That was so light, funny and refreshing! On a Monday, we need reads like this! Keep on...
     
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