Black Poetry : We Deserve Every Tomorrow

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Sheryl D Martin, Dec 18, 2003.

  1. Sheryl D Martin

    Sheryl D Martin Active Member MEMBER

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    WE DESERVE EVERY TOMORROW

    If you're more so here for me today then we deserve...every tomorrow
    I can't express it enough my love for you
    What was it that attracted you...to me ?
    Did you fall in love right away or was it a flesh thing ?

    Did it appeal to you that behind these big brown eyes I was lonely ,
    possibly sad wayyyyyy before you ever met me ?
    Were you that perceptive that you were able to tap in on my
    most inner emotions ?
    The past was just a shamble of misfortunes , many misleading

    This is a new day and instant repeats of yesterdays gone by
    ...are not my middle name
    You have my love of days gone by and many not seen...
    If it makes you feel any better...I'll be here whenever you need me

    Sheryl aka Seoria Meyanie Poetess 2000+ ...Keeping It Real Always and Clean !
     
  2. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    " Were you that perceptive that you were able to tap in on my
    most inner emotions ? "

    I'm liking this line. Knowing it exist. I have looked and saw her pain. Beneath that I saw the love she still needed to share. One emotion over shadowing another.. I couldn't keep the two straight. I couldn't tell the pleasure and the pain.
     
  3. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Really nice.

    Keep bringin' 'em.
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Right on point

    couldn't have been said better... nice scribe...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was ummmm!
    took me in like whoaaaa!
    flow on now ................
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek: sheriyllll ..i love this this is beautifull..


    took my breath...




    :wave: sister! :heart:





    Love L
     
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