Black Poetry : We Decided to Meet on an Island, Part III

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Looking up at the stars
    no need to wish upon one
    for she is here with him
    thy will be done.
    She is not sure if they should
    seek unknown shelter now...
    In the remote shelter of those arms,
    what more will fate entice her to allow?
    Passion persuaded their feet to take refuge
    in a crystal cave of encrypted coral, breathtaking.
    This treasure cove of wonder embraced the
    magical feeling that held them, painstaking.
    Reclining in their love nest, the fire, still burning,
    flickering against the backdrop of rubies and gold
    beauty to behold, inhibitions unfold,
    hands hold, fingers mold, sensuous secrets told
    As images of two, melt into one
    flowing into a tasty, luscious potion
    they drink of each others wonder
    lost in the mythical triangle of the ocean
    lust's tide takes them under
    and over the top, please, don't stop
    as voices echo, and honey glazed
    bodies rise and collapse, spent,
    amazed, and hopelessly dazed.
    He turns to her, and says wow,
    I was totally enraptured in our island paradise.
    Where to tomorrow? Oh, I don't know,
    she ponders, Egypt would be nice.
    He laughs and says, ok. She almost
    forgot to set the alarm. After a spirited tryst
    like that, it would be hard to get out of bed.
    Imaginations, magically kissed
    can take them anywhere they want to go.
    They decided to meet on an island, this time.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the meeting on the solo island of love
    this series is red hot lovin it
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for visiting this "fantasy island" of love Rich. Appreciate the response.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice done
    i gotta go find part2 guess i missed that one
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I appreciate the support mzblkangel, thanks. Yes, part 2 is around here somewhere.
     
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    Gurrrl! This is hot!!!!!
    A poetic series?
    I'm loving your flow!
    Cant wait to read
    where they will go next!!!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am humbled by your props, thank you. I don't know if they will be taking another trip any time soon, they should be tired, lol. I'll think about it.
     
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    Ummm can the character be called Triniti :look: ya know its ummm just a thought LoL
    Jus in case u needed help with names and stuff and stuff hehehe :D
    THe series was sweet my sista :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Happy you enjoyed triniti, thank you. I'll keep your name in mind when I name the characters, lol.
     
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    aaaaaaaaaaaaaawe....it was as if...I could feel a warm breeze...
    coming to shore from over that ocean...man...

    you're writing reminds me of the author Donna Hill...
    believe me...you could hang with the best of them

    say...*is someone considering publishing...a book maybe* :read:

    just tell me where to buy it...

    I'll be at the signing too... :coffee: java in hand
     
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