Black Poetry : WE DA PEOPLE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    We da People
    of these ameri-landz
    seeking da future
    in which we stand

    Callin to war
    by thy handz
    a fight against struggle
    yet we still hit & muzzled

    scrappin out of poverty
    in this unjustice liberty
    freedom mentally stain
    captured deep inside thy brain

    We da people
    african love deeper pride
    motherland
    da place to reside

    We da people
    broken, stolen
    beaten,hung
    like da tilly sun

    Drifting, movin
    crossin in escrow
    as lenders in life
    still today paying da price
    as da people .
     
  2. BrandNewMe

    BrandNewMe Member MEMBER

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    Bravo!
    We are the people the original people.
    And what your poem is saying to me is strength
    Just as my Grandmother would say.
    "What don't kill you will only make you stronger"
    And so it shall be. If it don't happen for us
    it will one day happen for our children, children, children.
    That is what our parents, grandparents and on and on
    have been working for. In Time it shall be
    Very nice piece


    Peace
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    YES YES YES BROTHA $$$RICH$$$

    we feel this erryday

    i'm hopin that the future won't continue to hold us in chains

    strong powerful piece

    and i'm loving it
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    We are da People Thank u sista for the love and warmth

    str8 up So'ja man the change coming bruh !
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thats a powerful piece bruh good to see a different side of you other than the love pieces nice nice piece deep flow
    8/10
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    big ups bruh , just showing another corner of my box