Quiet Poetry Lounge : We Belong to each other; Like Failed Romances

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  1. Caesarlee31

    Caesarlee31 Active Member MEMBER

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    II. for lakisha gavins
    we belong to each other like night and day
    and although I’ve chased you like the sun
    chases the moon I realize that I will never catch up
    you will never hear my love song or
    feel the love inside my touch.

    we belong to each other like pain and sorrow
    the more I look for a way to heal mine you
    open wounds because of yours
    but I can see past that
    you belong to me like the hope diamond
    a wish away from being a felony but hey, its mine too
    we belong to each other like hard times and depression
    wishing I could take a pill to relieve me of this pain
    but, I don’t want to fail at this because
    you and I are one
    I’ve cried your tears
    had your battles
    loved lost and then turned away
    20/20 I’ve done that to people my **** self.
    so, say good bye
    I’ll still be yours even when you walk away.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well well well !
    felt all dis here u said it deep and tyte
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight write...i enjoyed it
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sort of like chasing a dream. Something that's yours, but you can never quite capture it. I like your style.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    poetry is
    essence
    created so well here
    thanks again....
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh, my...
    this was so moving...
    love the concept...
    loving someone is
    a lot like this...

    wonderful flow!
     
  7. CarrieMonet

    CarrieMonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can relate. This is a nice, deep piece.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful piece, and the writting on the wall says it all...very creative indeed. thanks for sharing this with us.
    ...and welcome to the hot-spot
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heartbreaking, but beautiful.
     
  10. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow,....I understand about chasing and never quite catching what you think you want. Remember the love you feel but know also that this may be a preparation for one greater. Peace and blessings. Beautiful heartwrenching flow.
     
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