Black Poetry : We are riding the waves of our love..PartI

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  1. lilpea

    lilpea Moderator STAFF

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    We are riding the waves of our love

    We meet, we greet, we mingle, we love....
    Our eye catch each others not blinking but showing...
    Showing the heat ..showing the fire...showing the longing of passion between us.
    But we wait..we let it build then we let it die just a little.... then build up again.
    We are riding the waves of our love.

    These waves lap at our bodies forcing the pressure between us to build.
    As we hold one another we are at their will.
    No time or space no day no night for what we seek is clear out of sight.
    I hear your voice and I feel you breath the next thing I know I'm on my knees.
    You body is rid-get as I look at u standing above and once again....
    We are riding the waves of our love.

    I hold you close and smell your moist, sweet aroma
    And when I taste you your body comes alive and then goes into a coma.
    With each new kiss the waves just get bigger.. your hands grab the back of my head and beg me to go deeper
    But I wait..I wait for a sign..the sign that lets me know the you are mine like never before.
    And then I hear a sigh and a moan.. the moan of passion longing to be releast
    Then I know this is the time for that we gave.
    We are riding the waves of our love.

    "to be continued"

    Lilpea :1on1:
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling ya mane

    feeling ya

    can't be mad at ya
     
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    *to be continued? ....uhmm ...you sure you want to finish this, with the heat? ...the waves? a better question is...am I really old enough to hear the rest? :lol:
    Wonderful piece poet..and how well I know about the "waves of love" :bowdown:
     
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    Go head now bro. lilpea I was definitely riding on the wave of this. I will be waiting with baited breath for part II
     
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    THANK U ASIMPLEPOET

    Maybe I better go private with the next installments...hahahhahah

    THANKS BRO it is good that u feel this piece also.


    Lilpea :1on1:
     
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    ready2chat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHEW

    :hot: Long way from that first hallmark poem.. all I can say is umph umph umph:flame:.... sippin on my ice tea to cool off!
     
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    sweet release a tide of wave i lone to ride ......only heard of them this was wow!!!
     
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    I thought this was most excellent. Really, really feeling you here. My favorite lines are in pink. da whole thing almost pink!

    :spinstar: Wow, pea.... You are officially in my radar now...
     
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    Always expecting nothing but the surest of assertions from you my brother
    Whether they be political or poetic the result is nonetheless potent
    Props poet :read:
     
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    old school perfection...

    ...gotta bring things to a boil...then let it simmer. keep things hot. yeah...i'm still taking notes, lilpea. am i ready for graduation, yet?
     
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