Quiet Poetry Lounge : We are onE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Jul 31, 2013.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We are one
    I have loved you all these years
    Watched you mature in growth
    Watched you shed some tears
    It is clear…
    You love me.
    I’ve felt the pull of your heartstrings on mine
    Experienced the caress of your warmth
    …Over time
    For we are one
    We’ll confront tomorrow with the whole of our might
    Our bodies will TaNgO
    Deep into the night
    When morning comes we’ll begin anew
    Each day I’m blessed by each second with you
    After years are gone and we’re together no more
    One of us resting
    Forever
    At Heaven’s door
    Waiting the wait…‘til together, again
    Remembering our lives
    …As spouse…and friend
    For We are onE…in love.
     
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  2. Kadijah

    Kadijah Banned MEMBER

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    Beautiful.
     
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    i agree ... beautiful ... good to read you Baller ... :love:

    Love You!

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    Such a blessing to read you again, Precious Brother Poet baller.
    Your words love beautifully, my friend.


    "At Heaven’s door
    Waiting the wait…‘til together, again
    Remembering our lives
    …As spouse…and friend"

    Lovely. I felt these lines.

    (smile)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said brother .....love nest still rocks....
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it is wonderful to be read...to be appreciated. i thank each of you for dropping by. that you left a part of you is a blessing. THANK YOU.

    may the river continue to flow
     
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    WOW!!!! It has a peacefulness to it. A certainty. Love it Baller just love it.
     
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    Lovely...:hearts1:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladies...Thank you for the comfort.

    many blessings on your house.
     
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