Black Poetry : We all could use a BUNCE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Aug 26, 2004.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Zany maney, rainy weather.
    Bringing lovers close together.

    Get under this cover feller.
    Cause you gonna get sick.
    Then you won't have that strength or luster,
    for making love you need to muster.

    Then yo girl gonna find another.
    You'll sure be crying in this place.
    Take this hanky, clean up quick.
    Else you gonna be real sick. :puke2:
    Cause you know she likes you quick.

    Wipe your face.

    Then blow yo nose. :jawdrop:

    Crying trying to hold that pose.
    You ain't fool me. No not once.

    Cause you know you could use a bunce.
    Any sort of good fortune.
    Shouldn't be taken lightly see.

    So quit your squirming looking funny.

    I think you rolled yo eyes at me. :wink:

    See I have my lady waiting.

    Over cross the street right there.

    I'm gonna have to leave ya friend.

    Give back my hanky.

    Sir.


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    BUNCE : noun: a sudden happening that brings good fortune (as a sudden opportunity to make money) ( A Godsend; incentive; windfall )
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Is that why he can't get to me on time...too busy blowing and wipeing :laugh: :laugh: this was very creative and cute. thanks for springing something delightful on us.
     
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    QQ....Very slick creation here Hodee. I guess we all could use a bunce.
     
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    man u mastered a flow and expressed some thangz u know
    i beter keep my hanky tyte
     
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    Whoa, this is :hot: What a fun flow
     
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    very creative..enjoyed this read...
    ya pen been on fire lately..flow head on
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Hodee drop'n the words of truth! :bomb:
     
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    Ok hodee *giggles* I was like ok ok whas a "bunce" are we going to have CAKE!!! lolol
    But i did enjoy the concept brotha lol :)
    Hodee bear does it again!!!!
    :)
     
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    hey hodee,

    enjoyed reading your piece!
    greetz.moham
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaay Brother HODEE :wave:

    I'm shole glad you let a Sister know what a BUNCE is ... whew!

    I was jes' read'n and read'n ... thank'n ... now what is Brother HODEE talk'n 'bout! :)

    Then i got to the end and you helped a Sister undastan moe betta ... so i went back and read the peace wit that betta undastan'n and now i'm jes' smile'n and smile'n ... :)

    So good to read you ... thanks for the smile and education!

    :heart:

    Destee