Black Poetry : Way Past The Last Line

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Destee, Mar 6, 2001.

  1. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    i feel your embrace
    thru the poetry's page
    your words and your ways
    so romantically laid
    calming the rage
    i begin to erupt
    overflowing my cup
    shocked and amazed
    my soul is ablaze
    your ink makes me whine
    way past the last line
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All is Fair in Love and War

    Nothing is past the line when love is involved.;)
     
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    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling you Destee, gurl...but

    poetry can sometimes be the juciest of fantasy
    cuz some scribes could be so "un-free" in light
    of their reality...

    word to the wise, meet him first~

    good piece

    CELA
     
  4. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    thanks for the read ... for the love

    :heart:
     
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    BRING DA FLO BACK!

    here's a thread from long ago,
    the starter of this here-dropped a flow.
    and i'm bringing this back,
    cuz all thru the pages.
    we act like audiences,
    just peering at stages.
    you see time is precious,
    and yes it does pass.
    but every now and then,
    read a flow from page 400 or the last.
    see cuz we should never forget,
    how long the journey has been.
    and we should re-read poems,
    to remember them............
    :court:

    (if you understand then reply to this thread or from a thread from years ago)
     
  6. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    Sister LilCherry76 ... so sweet of you to bring this back ... :)

    Thanks For the Love.

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    destee....heeyyy sistah this was hot...i loved it...much lov...
    :heart:
    -story
     
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    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes

    very nice sister Destee :spin:
     
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    THEONE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop, :jawdrop:
     
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    oh my goodness
    straight form the archive
    the deep vibes
    see..this is cool:)
    because we get
    to read the flows
    from time past
    and that is why
    we need to keep
    supporting our home
    much love
    wonderful poem sis
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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