Black Poetry : Way Past Flirting...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Jan 12, 2004.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like a vice squad
    you raid me
    in the night, ransacking
    inhibitions free
    Rummaging through
    every page
    reading, memorizing
    passions to gauge
    Combing through
    circumstantial weakness
    intertwined with
    occasional meekness
    Roaming, searching
    every inch of skin
    something this illegal
    must be a sin
    Collecting the moisture
    of salty sweet sweat
    just how wet
    can a felony get?
    Circumstantial evidence
    at its best.
    In this instance
    I think I've been blessed
    to undergo a thorough
    search of all my desires....
    Wow, I guess we went
    way past flirting
    hours ago....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooooooweeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
    way past hours ago .............
    dis reminds me of a bliss
    very well done
    da sweet emotions was flowing here
    wow !!
    what a blessing
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankyou, Rich. Every once in a while I get up the nerve to post something on the warm side...lol...
     
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    rahstagal Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your imagination definetly ran wild nearly struck me upside my head..suprised. Reading this made my wonder as well....nicely put

    praise
     
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    thats cute...

    i like the way u laid this one out. keep em comin...
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

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    nice flow here
    flow on... :angel1:
     
  7. caramelpython

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    Yes I think you passed flirting and foreplay long ago..LOL
    Loved the fol
     
  8. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rahstagal, sometimes you just have to let the imagination go and write...thankyou.
    Poeticlyspeakin glad you liked the way I put it together...thanks.
    Mzblkangel, glad you like the flow, thanks.
    carmelpython, lol...ya think? Thanks for responding.
     
  9. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dayum!! this is off tha chain, sistah ;)
     
  10. triniti424

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    I agree sista YOU left "flirting" 3 miles down the road buck nekked LOLOL
    do ya thing my sista :)
     
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