Black Poetry : WAVES OF LOVIN

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    :luv: OCEAN LOVE :glasses:
    As i sit on the dock of the bay
    watching the Ocean dance
    in waves rapidly to the rock
    as it splash it's love around it
    so cool yet warm as my mental
    journey off into a bliss of it's
    own feeling the motion as the
    sun beam down all day i watch
    how it caressed and made love
    waves and breeze swoosh)))))
    as it hit hard fast slow and low
    the rock moan til dusk
    it was awesome lovin i vision
    soon before me my own spray
    of beauty was beside me
    as we walked to the sandy shore
    laid down in our own rapture
    as the sun part and moon rise
    it came up redish orange
    the starz peep out in a glow
    the water became still the rock
    watched the wind got mild
    as we took to bliss in the sand
    hand n' hand holdin, caressin
    kissin and mixin skin dippin
    bodies clappin pushin, pullin
    hittin moanin , rollin , tongue
    strollin body foldin , it was
    from the Ocean love i pose this
    bliss upon her lips as she bite down
    funny soundz in the windz a whisper
    romancing perfectly as sea gulls
    cross our heads we made
    compassionate love all night
    on the sandy shore as sprinkles of
    water splash toes curl head swril
    mesmerized into hypnozation of love
    my heart was flooded with her sweet
    essence and the round of her beauty
    our souls took to the sky
    she was the gallop of my dreams
    silent screams on every thump
    bumppin left and right str8 tight
    inside out riding sliding squeezin
    pleasin to extreme measure of us

    soon the Ocean make waves pushing
    great gifts from the botton
    but i need not any pearls
    for she is my black pearl of rapture

    i need not a diamond
    for in her eyes was a sparkle so
    bright and divine

    i need not the nuggets
    for her skin was as golden and
    worthy of any stones

    her lips was ruby's i need not a
    gem i hand beside me a Queen
    a gift from above made only for me

    as we made feverish love
    their was no room for sexuality
    it was like da OCEAN LOVE in waves
    :flame: :flame: :luv: :flame: :flame: :spinn:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    liking them ocean waves..wow
    this was a bliss of wow..lol
    loving the flow as always....
    got me lookin for that shore
    beside the this dreamy ocean
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    if u don't fine it we can make one..........lol
    thanks sistah Angel
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :blush: sounds good...lol
    your welcome
     
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    indeed !!! likewise
    coz waves of da ocean
    is lovinly divine a rapture
    ya heart can caress and
    treasure forever
    splash)))))) tymeeeeeeeeeeee!
     
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    The imagery here was simply beautiful. I particularly liked this line:
    "she was the gallop of my dreams"
    Keep this flow going.
     
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    thankz watz it's the lovin from da mental
     
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    Oooooooo so romantic.....I likes this.....much luv Rich for anotha masterpiece
     
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    I liked this ocean love...classic lol
     
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    thankz foxi & sensualreality
     
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