Black Poetry : Wave Of Emotions

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by CasualFriday, Sep 13, 2004.

  1. CasualFriday

    CasualFriday Member MEMBER

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    Riding a wave filled with emotion
    Proclaiming our deep and undying devotion
    Gently rocked by each sensual motion
    Bodies massaged by the rhythmic stroking

    Chest to breast; Breath to breath
    Your heartbeat merged with mine
    Our souls magnetically intertwined

    The waves get higher
    Hot as fire
    Motions get stronger
    Strokes get longer
    Heartbeats faster
    Cares drift past us

    Floating alone on our peaceful sea
    One melodically created by you and me
    No place in the universe I'd rather be
    Than in your arms with you....... holding me
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hold on...and let me say, that's a good place to be :love: in the arms of love.
    nice piece and welcome to the spot where all hearts ...join together.
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece leaves one floating, very peaceful and free...very enjoyable.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how i love this piece it took me down deep and back
    keep flowing be lovin it !
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was saying sumpthin here nice drop
    likes the vibe
    flow head on
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great Rhythm and meter...

    Love your style poet!

    Keep it rockin, :spinstar:
    Sage
     
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