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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jun 3, 2006.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Beyond da black soul
    filled in red hope
    the blood spills deep
    each black seed planted
    through poverty
    days of struggles denounced
    da anger rise from the soil
    to a shattered dream
    awareness become a lace
    names change to protect
    the guilty as similarities clash
    souls become deja vu in a
    closed facsimile of morrow
    men become chess pieces
    on a boarded land of words
    skillfully moved , manipulated
    breaking da best of defenses
    or conjure an illusion of pretenses
    as it draw upon da exaggerated
    beyond resort to da sword
    if to be thy fate
    whom thy claim in envy
    man foolishly acts distorts da nouns
    provokes da verbs into action
    alter objects with gun
    in a mindless battle ground
    displaying a dead war lost
    only to find the moves checkmated.

    watermelon child
     
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    alright now rich loving this unique flo of yours flo on brotha.:horse:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you sista Nevar for the visit and feeling me on this piece
    as the messanger arrives again through da watermelon child ..
     
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    man foolishly acts distorts da nouns
    provokes da verbs into action
    alter objects with gun
    in a mindless battle ground
    displaying a dead war lost
    only to find the moves checkmated..

    RICH, that's as real as it comes....a excellent write, a very active piece describing a writing....im diggin the flow....write on, poet.
     
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    Big Thankz abstract219 it was from da weight of da mind .
     
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