Black Poetry : Water Guns That Fire Bullets

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    water gun conditioned kids
    wet others for fun under the
    hot sun on Sundays in the Summer
    parents equip the kids with
    H two O clips and a faucet
    that drips liquid bullets
    that kill......for play

    Now when lil' johnny ,labeled
    with a new nickname, fires
    his nine miili in the Nick of
    time will it be a crime since he
    was conditioned to be a killer?

    tabloid shows / evening
    expose's want to expose the
    "process of elimination"
    of the inherent innocent
    soul in kids...but don't want
    to air preventive solutions
    in this So-ciety that socializes
    the young to be killers

    "You have the right to
    bear arms" but bare your
    pistol on your hip and you go
    to jail / legal oxymorons /
    confuse and condemn common
    sense thinking

    to the point that pointing
    a water gun and firing is CONsidered
    fun and the jokes on you when
    you're wet /

    play dead.....the laws say you must
    and in God they trust to captilize
    on this market of killing and
    stealing morality at 50,000
    kids deaths a year in this
    CON-try

    history repeating itself
    this nasty history still teaching
    lessons of stealing....you know
    how this CON-try was found....
    you know how this CON-try was
    taken....you know how
    Native Americans were killed
    (other than biological warfare)
    ....water guns that fired bullets.


    (c)2001 blakverb "off da top thinkin"

    *hey fam...yeah, yeah, yeah I'm supposed to be gone. I saw this show on television last night about that Kip Kinkel kid that killed all those folks (I can't remember the locale) and it drove me to write this.
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What a tragedy...

    the Kip Kinkel story is......

    I see I'm not the only one who was watching
    the PBS broadcast of this story the other night! :wink: :wink:

    You know this piece is on point!!

    "100" (tell the story Blakman)

    One :heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    yes sir !!
    I too saw des show
    stay up my brutha
    drop in when u can:toast:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    a pity...

    ...how we train our kids to do all those things we don't want them to do as adults...and wonder where they got it from...or, how they turned out like that.

    great piece, blak

    i see the flow won't let you go.:)

    keep writing blak man

    peace
     
  5. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb

    off tha top thinkin ma butt :))).... I missed the show but thanks for sharing and educating me like you always do
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i didn't see the program but this poem showed the way.
    keep enlightening us, blak!
    -7
     
  7. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YO BLAK !!

    it is my opinion...only my humble opinion that when its time 4 your retreat.... that which is greater than you.. will intercede and before you know it you will be in the midst of your hiatus....now ..i believe is not the time ....not while your creating masterpeices such as this after watching... one show...this of course is only my humble opinion. I say again..... MASTERPEICE !!!!

    respect due
    ONE!!!

    On A Continuous Journey
     
  8. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** SHAME!

    ...and you are leaving us?

    what will we do without our concious?


    u will be missed blak....know dat


    da :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: :spinstar: GODDESS SUPREME
     
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