Black Poetry : Watching The Cars Go By

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by vanneya, Jun 6, 2003.

  1. vanneya

    vanneya Member MEMBER

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    It is ok to cry.
    Come here sit next to me on the front stairs awhile.
    We can watch the cars go by.

    Yes I know the world is not always fairs.
    And there is more to life then these front stairs.

    We all got some growing to do. Yeah, yeah me too.
    Some times you just got to sit a while.
    Relax and your answer will come by.
    Just sitting and watching the cars go by.

    Ah, I see your smile. See what happens when you relax awhile.
    Deal with problems one step at a time.
    Yes, sittings on the stairs watching the cars go by.

    Chilling and taking life a step at a time.

    Peace:heart:
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this...inspirational and sweet...
     
  3. vanneya

    vanneya Member MEMBER

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    Wonderful, I’m glad you like it.

    Congratulation LovelyGoldenOne. I am very happy for you future Wife. Many blessing to you and your future soul mate.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I love this poem...it's just so relaxing in a way :) .
     
  5. vanneya

    vanneya Member MEMBER

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    Thank you SwtT,
    Relaxation can be as simple as sitting on the steps...LOL
    Peace
     
  6. PurpleMoons

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    Nice Vanneya! This scribe really do have an affect on me!
    (smilin from ear to ear)
     
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    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This poem is soooo full of wisdom.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ooooooo wow! love this
    it flowed out so sweet and relaxing
     
  9. vanneya

    vanneya Member MEMBER

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    Mental Relaxation, good for the Soul..Thank you all for welcoming into the family...Your kindness is a motivation, and the reading of others poetic an inspiration.
    Peace
     
  10. skrybe7

    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm diggin' the whole relaxation vibe fo' sho!
    tyte flow, Poet!
     
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