Black Poetry : watching me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticwordstris, May 1, 2003.

  1. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can feel someones eyes watching me.
    Staring me down like a hawk in search of its prey.
    This feel butterflies my stomach, and races my heart beat.
    I feel someones eyes watching me,
    Looking at me like i'm a prized possession.
    watching my every move making sure that i don't disappear.
    Making my spine tingle and my knees knock.
    Making my lips tremble and my heart drop.
    who is this watching me?
    Breathing on my circumference, invading my space?
    I feel uncomftable please leave, my circumference is not your place!!!!!
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's kinda like, you feel someones eyes on you with love. But i guess you want the eyes to go away? Im kinda ignorant to this piece but I did feel you one some type of level....Keep flowin the love,
    Swtness
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Interesting vibe, like Maxwell' (Somebody's Watching Me)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very nice...
     
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    indeed watching from above !!!
    eyez glazing very tyte flow !
     
  6. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bard$$maximus:
    i need someone to take care of me
    caress me in ways only heard of in fairytale dreams.
    i need someone to hear me when i speak,
    i need someone to hold me when i sleep
    massage my feet.
    I need love!!!!
     
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