Black Poetry : watching me part 2

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by poeticwordstris, May 2, 2003.

  1. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I bite my tounge as i fill with aggervation
    As you stare at me i slowly lose my patience
    You make me wanna burst out with negative verbalation.

    "Can i help you with something?"
    Your eyes make my brain bubble and blood vessels start popping.
    I can't stand the way you look at me
    Like i'm your worst enemy.

    I feel your ignorance sweating my style
    it seems like jealousy to me
    you wish you had my face, and smile.

    I ball up my fist
    because you act like you want some of this,
    Watching me like your doing a stake out.
    Under investigation,
    taking notes, watching my every move,
    ****!!!!!
    i ain't know i was that smooth.

    so once again
    "Can i help you with something?"

    If not then chic leave my cicumference



    :maddd:
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's your world baby girl. You have made your point!

    Keep scribin' (on the p.t.)

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed it's yours do as u do
    keep flowin' sis...
     
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    I know what you mean Gurl. Haters are like that. Love your style
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Nice....very nice.

    This seems like a fun poem to hear you read.

    Come home Open Mic/Poetry and drop this piece on us. We'd love to hear and feel your flow.

    :toast:
     
  6. poeticwordstris

    poeticwordstris Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx glad to know yall liked it:)
     
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