Black Poetry : Watchin My Back…

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  1. MzMelanie2u2

    MzMelanie2u2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Who’s Who? that’s the question of my life.
    Through out these 16 years, most of wat I’ve felt is strife.
    No one to really turn to,
    But their all so quick to say…”Hey gurl! Don’t I know you”?
    Rhetorical questioning, don’t even try that.
    Cuz I remember you,
    you’re the same one who tried to stab me in my back.
    I’ve come to realize that there’s a lot of Slim’s, but all of them are quite Shaddy.
    So im constantly checkin my company,
    Making sure I know whos tryin to get next to me.
    You somehow know how to talk my talk and even managed to imitate my walk.
    Its almost as if I can hear Dre in the back ground singing…”You are the prototype”…
    But I’ve got news for you,
    And please trust and believe that every word that proceeded out of my mouth is true.
    I see you and I know your objective
    Cuz Im watchin my back…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    continue to do so this was tyte and smoothly done
     
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    hisili Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gurl u droppin verses so fast i can barely keep up but im definately luvin tha flow neva eva stop writin'. Luv u much fa real
     
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    your outlook on these things will certainly take you far. nice drop
     
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    speak it i so understand..watch your back
    tight and smooth drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Always sista, always....Loved the slick in your face style poet.
     
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