Black Poetry : Watch your Back

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Mar 15, 2004.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Denied a decent place, robbed of the home ancient place of birth.
    Pushed around with no land or place on this earth.

    When I think about the condition of my people.
    Latched to a patch of uncaring creepers.

    Stolen brought here in chains, just cant win.
    Kept down by the one with a clept in his chin.

    Traveling down the road I encountered a man.
    I asked for direction.
    He had deceit in his hand.

    Little did I know he was setting me up for rejection.
    He had his head down.
    I had a hunch my mind stored and recorded.
    The subconsious data like it was lunch.

    Somethings wrong.

    I learned what history has to share.
    Whats left.
    Found.
    Pulled from the air.

    Denied a place can't trust his hand.
    You can't trust just any man.
    So as you travel this distant land.
    Look out for that man with the clept in his chin.
     
  2. turtle1

    turtle1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey

    HODEE DOING IT UP!!
    I LIKE IT MAN!!! HOPE TO HEAR YOU SPEAK IT.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    watching coz dis was str8 tyte drop
    lovin it bruh
     
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    nice drop brother
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight drop
    likes this
    Peace
    Angel
     
  6. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Having to ask for help from the same people who put you in the position to need help in the first place....Good description of this kick in the teeth situation.
     
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    I'm really feeling you on that poem. tight flow
     
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