Black Poetry : Wash me down ...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by msluciousb, May 22, 2002.

  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wash me down with the flow
    cleanse me with peace and
    then let me go.
    Wash me down with ya love
    and give us both what we
    been dreaming of.
    Wash me down in sorrows
    creek, hold me close but
    don't ya speak.
    Wash me down where salted
    tears mingle, then wipe me
    dry til my skin just tingles
    Wash me down with words of
    comfort, give me hope that all
    is not lost, what a great cost
    Wash me down from head to
    toe...then wash me down just
    once mo'
    BJS(C)2002
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    can i get in on dis kinda cleaning ....!
    I loved this one gurl !!
     
  3. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't get me started with you!!!!!

    Now you know better than to ask me that...I am weak right now
    and so vunerable...oooooooh mr. strippa man muy caliente!!!!!:hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :tongue:
    stop playin with my emotions...
    BLESSINGS ON YA HOUSE!
     
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    hot N' wet

    I ain't down from flyght for nothing becareful coz i'm in da mood
    watch me strip.......oooooooops did i say dat!!!?:eek: :D
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know I can’t read all the poems on the page and still keep my job so I select the ones with the interesting titles regardless of who wrote them and your poems keep coming up. I guess you just flow like dat. Loving your stuff so just keep on doing what you doing dat dare.
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    And I am most appreciative!

    I can appreciate that, and I do appreciate your taking the time to
    read and respond. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the feedback!
     
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    Agentshaft007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im diggin this piece Boo!! Bathe me in your words as they cleanse me deep to my verbal soul. Wash my tears yet save them for a rainy day. aaaahhhhh yeeeeesssss

    The AgentShaft007
     
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