Black Poetry : Wash me down (Repost)

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  1. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wash me down with the flow
    cleanse me with peace and
    then let me go
    Wash me down with ya love
    and give us both what we
    been dreaming of
    Wash me down in sorrows
    creek, hold me close but
    don't ya speak
    Wash me down where salted
    tears mingle, then wipe me
    dry til my skin just tingles
    Wash me down with words of
    comfort, give me hope that all
    is not lost, what a great cost
    Wash me down from head to
    toe
    then
    wash me down
    just once
    mo'
    Bjs(C)2002
     
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    hmmmm..interesting....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I can do all dat !!!
    when do i start!????
     
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    well "wash" on then!!! :) i like that. really nice, poet.
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah it was necessary!

    Just reposting made me feel all washed down...hahahahahah! Glad you enjoyed the read...as for you Rich stop playing!
    Bishop? Just interesting...My sista ya got to flow what ya know...it was a feeling that was working for me and I just went with it! Wash all of 2002 right down the drain! Ready for my powder now!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
  6. Mind~$oul

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    nice concept with this piece

    keep it flowing

    one luv
     
  7. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ONE MORE TIME FOR THOSE WHO MISSED IT!

    For my new scribes who didn't get to enjoy this read, and I hope that you will, this is some of my more erotic/symbolic work...just wanted to share, while I prepare my piece for Black History month! Tell me your interpretations please?

    Blessings on your house! :kiss:
     
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    yes my sistah feeling this scribe
    wash me down one mo time
    as i heal with the time
    very strong ..
    feeling this

    Nice indeed:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  9. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Bluewater!

    This one has so many meanings to me, it has a healing message as well, at least that is my intent...Feeling revitalized now!

    BLessings on your house!
     
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    To me :) I read it as...something that took the mind and soul and relished the feeling of release and relief whether it be from love or simply letting go...I Loved it :)
     
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