Discussion in 'Short Stories - Authors - Writing' started by Poeticsoulsista, Jun 29, 2003.
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this is DEEP. it's interesting how we can turn someone's personal tragedy into something about us. because Tameeka put herself at the center of everything, she thought it was okay to bed her best friend's man...although, i'm sure Enzinga doesn't see her as her best friend anymore. you should really expand on this...maybe list a few lessons to be learnt.
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I really love this and wow how deep it was
mo ! mo ! mo ! .......................
da story to read into
mo ! mo ! mo !
I'm glad you liked it Rich. This was my first story and I was afraid to post it but thanks to you, I have more confidence in my short stories. I really want to be a writer but I have a long way to go. Thanks for the support.
indeed ya start is beautiful and sweet
it pose great dapth
ya skillz is awesome ur on ya way to that dream
many blessing and good luck in ya journey
to me u are a writter
That means alot to me Rich, I hope the world feel the same way.
surely they will once it all fall in place
good luck on this journey
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