Black Poetry : was it u

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I see in u
    a love so true
    make my heart
    feel a new
    ya love was gentle
    sweet & mild
    make da face flash
    da smile
    so tender wit cares
    is kinda love to bare
    ya emotions
    rock in wave
    make my body crave
    to the lone touch

    I see in u
    a bond of hope
    a Queen of essence
    a lady of love
    she was like da angel
    above
    her sweet kiss of bliss
    was capture in my heart
    she pose a rapture

    who is she i wanna know
    before these feeling go
    i wanna look deep into
    her eyes
    feel da bliss of mesmerize
    i am da desire of destiny
    she may be my dynasty
    who is she i wanna know !
    before these sweet feelings
    go

    I see in u
    the worthy soul
    a woman to forever hold
    a compassion of love
    she 's a gift from above

    tell me if it's u
    yeah! i'm talking to u

    it was into da night
    when i return from flyte
    i saw ya face a million tymes
    soft sweet lovin & divine

    i seem to not know ya name
    is this mix only a game
    i wanna talk to u
    in my heart i feel something true
    i wanna walk wit u
    hand n' hand
    side by side
    even tonight a joy ride
    to a place few ever go
    a place only love can know
    is it u .....!?

    somebody say something !!!!
    :eek:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow!!!!!:eek: you talkn to me rich???? Tyte flow!!!! :heart:
     
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    Making the ladies melt Rich..keep it up man! I like this piece.
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** rich!! this is beautiful......i think your talkin' to me....lol:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    swtT................is it u ? was u there if so i can tell u .....but was it u ?

    Rico...........word up brutha i have to stay on da mindz so they don't forget da true essence of love from above .......Thankz

    hey Cindy nice flow as u know but was it u i wanna know
    so let me thank u before i go !? ....

    LovelyG...........was u there was it u before i tell it all to u
    one will know by the love i flow but was it u i wanna know !?


    Thankz family but who was she that's on my mind
    i vision her soft sweet devine soul
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :raises hand like a child: IT was ME!!!
     
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    swtT....it was thee
    da love so sweet
    in my mind cute
    as can be
    allow my bliss
    of rapture
    to capture u in dis maze
    as i set off da romantic
    blaze
    see i saw in ya eye
    a love so devine
    and warmth of comfort
    that gave me da start
    so i bring wit me
    compassion
    a trust so real
    ready to let u feel
    da inner soul
    wrap u in my arm
    as of gold
    as i continue dis
    story to be told
    from da essence of ya beauty
    see babe it wasn't da booty
    it was da heart
    the free style soul
    dis in me i truely hold
    ahhhhh! da Queen
     
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    Count me in Rich, I think after this one...I'm an official "Rich Groupie".............Feelin your flo fa sho! This piece was quite smooth!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    angelic...........u say count u in
    da beauty deep within
    da love u pose like a single rose
    da heart of warmth a soul so
    sweet like a treat
    a beautiful feast
    ur in my sweet
    to stay just
    com in flyte upon me tonight
    allow da magical $$RICHNE$$
    to embrace da essence of
    ya tender heart
    indeed ya one of my love angels
     
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    " a woman to forever hold
    a compassion of love
    she 's a gift from above "

    Your words. Angels do fly low. Every once in a while they touch down.

    I feel ya. That all night conversation. When no one knows what time it was. Didn't care. Hanging on the phone for hours. Long distance kind of thing. She was so close yet so far kind of love.

    Your style I can appreciate.