Black Poetry : Wars of Mindz

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Fighting da war of mind
    twice da notion so blind
    between right & wrong
    living da bound of da strong

    Mental confussion wit great depth
    deep display heart was sweap
    beyond compare of such love
    wrap in rapture da gift from above

    Moments made between two
    da beauty of hearts , start of new
    as days past now gone
    yet i'm still singing this mild song

    How my love whispers in da night
    feeling da essence of her sweet delight
    cascading in glist of da moonz
    listening to da hollow of soft tunes

    I know by reason passing all seasons
    that the realism of morrow
    each time my eyez glaze
    sending me into this love faze

    Somehow somewhere someway
    we continue to battle mentally
    in da war of minds as time blow/
    my body lay still wet and cold
    awaiting your tender warmth

    As we fight these temptation
    of sensual affection
    betraying da arms of love's direction
    as year end like December crash
    how long will this abandonment last .?
    as i slowly walk away:bye:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Perhaps in the glist of the slivery flight
    Her love will catch you in the still of the night
    Or maybe you should slow it down to a crawl,
    then you might even here when she call.
    Great piece poet ...^5
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It sounds soo ....
    It's heart...
    Like a storm
    Rumbling


    I found this inexplainable $$RICH$$
    But Beautiful poem Poet
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and just maybe between here and their
    a display of tenderly care
    or maybe i need to float
    so i can partake in one's stroke well u know Queen

    thank u sista PLATINUM sometime things can't be explain
     
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    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful

    thi poem was beautiful rich im just waiting for the part two and three
    i feel like it can be done
     
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    Don't walk away from love, Bro. $$RICH$$,

    We love the work you do.
     
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    I'm sure there's another upcoming series where the mindz clash
    thankz a million Mistaliberator

    well 1poet sometime walking can make one run unto u
    which i hope happen ...lol Thankz bruh a million times
     
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    Hey $$RICH$$
    It is indeed a comment vessel we all have ridden
    And the voyage is never easy. Even those we have
    Become expert’s sailors, it is hard at times to keep
    A float, yet we do, because we must.
    Much love to you poet. Very deep. Just like the ocean

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    Thank u sista bluewaters great to see yo pen flowing here again
     
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