Black Poetry : Warrior

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  1. Negro Harmony

    Negro Harmony Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    On the bloody battle field
    A young Warrior stood
    And looked around to see
    The mutilated dead bodies of fellow warriors

    The sweat on her brow grew from the pulsing sun
    Her knuckles went white
    From clutching her sword
    With all her remaining strength

    She stood on the hill overlooking the field that became so many
    Warriors grave
    The wind blew her midnight black hair around her
    As she walked away soaked in blood
    With her sword at her side
    That's when it came to her

    She realized
    What they were fighting for went
    Beyond Glory
    Beyond Strength
    Beyond Honor
    Beyond even life itself
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow...that was one deep drop
    of an worrior at war...............
     
  3. Negro Harmony

    Negro Harmony Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks appreciate it
     
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    most welcome keep the ink flowing ...
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was a nice poem, i was feelin that, and it was true about having a war beyond life its self, nice flo so flo on wit nonstop
    dis yo sistah jus showin sum luv

    blackluv and bp
     
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    Our heroine has always been true to the warrior spirit.

    I salute YOU... for recognizing her import.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A true warrior who will never really be defeated, for she lives on within us. Powerful piece.
     
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    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW this piece is nice. I could see her very good depiction FLo On
     
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