Black Poetry : Warmth of my Soul

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Unbreakable loneliness
    As the wind hits my window
    And the storm roars……..
    My soul lays cold of thoughts of you
    Wishing I could feel your touch
    Holding on to a thought
    Of you thinking of me…..
    A craving of you and I
    In the mist of the rain
    Love moved across the air
    Don’t you know…..
    The way you love me
    Sets me a blaze…. moves my soul
    I can dance in a fairytale..
    Set free the moon
    And capture the moment
    Listen to the windz of love….
    Wonders of devotion in this
    Bittersweet romance mix
    I give you me…
    in ivy covered lace
    Within the storm we created
    Can you feel…….
    The warm summers breeze
    Upon Egyptian black sands…
    Your moon becomes my sun
    Candy cover fantasies…love at its best
    Play my harp..
    ……………enhance my essence
    taste me…take my soul
    Mold my heart lift my being
    Do you know…….
    I was made for you
    My angel of love
    My Prince
    I have been waiting a lifetime for you
    soul mate of my soul

    (C) 2004
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis here is awesome the
    depth of ya soul
    beckoning da mate
    a long await has arrive
    tyte drop
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This scribe had a warm feel to it, and such pretty images laid.
     
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    nice ease to your flow
    much love
    Peace~N~Love
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all for the love
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Sista,
    This was some down deep cleansing....Nice flow...Big Up:)

    Like I say....You sistas at Destee, sure know how to raise the bar..

    Peace, Power, and Prosperity
     
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    All that you said...poured from your heart...to his. That a beautiful poem he can he not feel the vibes from this. thanks for sharing this.
     
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    Touching.. very tight flow...!
    As i was reading it i imagined different nice scenarios...
    Nice!......
     
  9. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all
    for your kind words
    glad you enjoyed
    my scribe
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    beautiful poem :luv:
    You doing your thing here :look:
     
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