Black Poetry : War Hero

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Jan 24, 2002.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    He ro
    was wearin'
    an old
    'death on high'
    t-shirt
    with
    soiled in the car
    repair trenches
    fatigues
    He ro was
    trying to prove
    he was beyond
    --n a t u r a l l a w s
    none of which applied
    to him
    'cept
    maybe Gods -- as
    the only laws --
    articles that applied
    to him were
    in the
    police blotter
    published in the
    Star Tribune--
    showin' arrest records
    running roughly
    3 weeks behind
    the crime
    ...the next
    offense waiting
    to catch up
    with the last
    just like those
    triple cuervos
    skimmed with
    lighter fluid
    he was trying to
    ignite with a
    B.I.C --
    an effort
    doomed to
    failure it seemed
    but that didn't
    stop he ro from
    trying
    nor did it
    stop the
    bartender from
    feeding him
    shooters
    ...... ??



    *I've been playin' round wit endings to this piece ... if anyone has something... hollar ~


    (c) 2002 FINDING SO(u)LUTIONS
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    Oh, my goodness! Well, please stop leaving us hanging like this!

    I got all into this and then....BAM! You left a cliff-hanger and a teaser! :maddd:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    you got it down pac ya self love the flava
     
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