Black Poetry : Wants

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MsBerry_98, Feb 23, 2002.

  1. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there’s no need for explanation
    to the world
    or to ourselves.
    i want you.

    mostly just for this moment
    maybe for this eternity

    I want you to plant
    your sincerity, faith, hopes, desires,
    passion, strength, pain, failures,
    creativity, talents, accomplishments,
    and dreams
    deep inside of me.

    i want to live
    until sunlight fades and falls from the sky
    inside of you.

    inside of your tomorrow,
    sharing every moment
    as if i had been born
    to live for you, through you, in you, with you.

    I want to steal…
    steal one piece of everlasting joy and perfection
    from reality
    call it you.

    create something incredible
    nurtured by our talents

    each second…
    falling deeper into something insatiable

    i want so much…
    but time continues to fall like so much rain
    sucked away never to be the same

    so will you be…
    my dream?
     
  2. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsB.


    ...excellent scribin' sistah-friend!! ****!! :)

    i am simp-ly lovin' the feelin' behind da flow!!
    & the picture this piece painted was awesome.

    :heart:
    Elayne.
     
  3. WindWalker

    WindWalker Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a very good read
     
  4. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ****
    if this was inspired or written for someone special they should feel blessed to have someone so into them

    this piece was love
    and i felt it

    dssNY
     
  5. mizdee2002

    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    pretty word thoughts, big sis!

    luv ya,
    dee
     
  6. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwww... you guys...

    Sunny E... I'm soooo glad u stopped by for a read. Thanks for the luv. You know I'm just trying to be like you... :D

    Wind Walker... Thanks for the read and the compliment.

    SO'JA... Well, let's just say that some people don't recognize a blessing when it's sitting in their lap...
    (so to speak). ;)

    Dee... thank you gurl!!! You know I luv ya!
     
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    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Beautiful poem. Thank you.

    BE
     
  8. MsBerry_98

    MsBerry_98 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE... no, thank you for the read.
     
  9. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gurl, this piece heyah it's really truly tyght! i am lovin' the flo of it, as well. keep on scribin', because it's tyght! i'm watchin'....



    ~~~chaptasoflove~~~
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MsB,

    Dayuuum, I figured ya had it like that!!!!!

    Ya got skillz!!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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