Black Poetry : Wants

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by SuperFly, May 30, 2005.

  1. SuperFly

    SuperFly New Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes you think everyone cares about what you want
    And sometimes people think you care about what they want
    Well, heres my time to say what i want.

    I want to be me
    I want to be recognized for what i do
    I want to be the one everyone knows
    I want to my dreams to come true
    I want to find my knight in shining amor
    I want to give my heart and get it back in one piece
    I want to see my name in lights

    But i guess when we come to the realization of the situation
    We all know that no one cares about what you want but you
    and that no one cares about wut i want but me

    Moral of poem
    The world is a selfish place and everyone cares about only themselves
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well said to a point some care and some don't
    everyone must make the choice to who is who
    and understanding needs & wants

    nice piece written on reality of life
     
  3. Mit Mit

    Mit Mit going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Superfly I really enjoyed your poem
    it is sad to say but you are right alot of people only cares for themselfs
    but it's a good thing that GOD CARES FOR US ALL!

    Thanks Keep up The GOOD WORK.
     
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