Quiet Poetry Lounge : Wanting Someone

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  1. UniqueOne

    UniqueOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wanting Someone

    There is this feeling inside
    Of wanting someone to confide in
    But having to hold back from expressing how I feel
    It’s so hard to deal with these things
    Wishing that these dreams could come true
    The dream of having you
    In my arms to hold
    I try so hard not to show how I feel for you
    All the things I want to say and do
    Yet I must hold back
    I want to ask you how you feel about that
    How you feel about how I feel
    About how I am handling the situation
    Things just won’t be all right
    Because I can no longer fight
    This urge to have someone to call my own I’m tired of all being alone in this cold heartless world
    With out have someone to stand by his lonely girl
    With out someone by my side to consume these feelings I’m trying to hide
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    let it out ........let him know
    let it be felt in yo flow
    open heart
    please don't hide
    let da love sho it's side
    soon true love will come to reside
    speaketh
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hiding at necessary

    hide nothing from no one,
    let it all flow.
    make no pit stops,
    just let your heart go.
    if you don't let him hear these words,
    will you know his answer at all?
    holding back things,
    will only make the pain grow tall.
    speak wht you feel,
    never lie.
    be up front,
    for if you don't--you die.
    we can't say it all,
    but we can have our say.
    why hold back your love for him tomorrow,
    when you can love him today????? (4 real):hot:
     
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    i agree with the masses
    tell him now regardless,
    if u love him, say so
    release ur feelings let them go.
    if you died tomorrow it be a shame
    u held back how u felt
    that is insane
    even if he does not respond
    to you
    empty ur heart
    it's what u must do.
     
  5. UniqueOne

    UniqueOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh how i try not to hide
    how i feel deep inside
    but the situation won't allow
    so what can i do now
    if i tell him i'll feel pain
    if i don't it's just same
     
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    painless motions of ya wordz
    dis da whisper to be heard
    situation stack free
    open up trust in me
    hold back is a real true smack
    ya heart will continue to
    raddle & crack
    let it out sweet & firm
    and dis pain will be no more u burn
    it's ya emotional state of mind
    holding back stop wasting tyme
    shine like da Queen u r
    let it out shout it far
    open ya mental to release
    as ya heart mend with da wind
    free from under dis spell
    i truely feel u so
    but dis i must let u know
    tell the truth from da start
    let him know from da heart
    don't hold it in it's like a sin

    speaketh Queen be felt be seen it a lovely thing .......
     
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    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REPLYING BACK

    i love so much,
    that you wrote to me.
    and i am so glad,
    i joined destee.
    thanks for responding,
    this you didn't have to do.
    but i'm so glad,
    that you decided to.
    please respond,
    anytime for anything.
    for what is the use of a bird that can fly,
    if he has a broken wing???????????(thanx again):rolling:
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful poem gurl no other word for it ;) peace and blessins keep flowin
     
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    hmmmmm! I know what you mean.
     
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