Black Poetry : Wanted

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  1. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She was brown…
    Not your average brown…
    But a deep dark delicious…
    Hershey un-commercialized brown…
    A chocolate dream…
    Deep, creamy and unblemished…
    She radiated smooth…
    Emitted majesty…
    Regal oozed out of her pores…
    Her confidence wafted across continents…
    Her intelligence was absolutely intoxicating…
    And the moment I saw her...
    I knew…
    Angel she was…
    Queen she was…
    Woman she was…

    She was African...

    She was...

    All…

    I ever…

    Wanted.
     
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    very nice....
    this was tight
    thanks for sharing it
    Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    7thPoet...

    Yes...she is. Yes, she is...until you get to know her. smh j/k

    Nice vision of she...lovely.

    :thanks: for sharing your vision of her with us.

    :toast:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    deep chocolate indeed a brown untouched indeed
    until the mixture tyte write bruh !
     
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    7th,

    This was beautiful....
     
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    i liked this one.... keep spittin them out
     
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    The description here, and how deeply she made an impression upon you, I can see why she was all you ever wanted. Regally expressed.
     
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    This was great...great descriptive imagery........I can almost see her now
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My humble appreciation to all who responded. You guys are great and continually lift my spirit.

    Just a note to Chastity, Watz, Jazzy and Angel:
    This poem was written not about an individual but about all you incredibly beautiful Black women who grace our planet. I love you and think you should be raised to the level you deserve.

    I have never been with a white woman.
    I have never had the desire to be with a white woman.

    A Black Woman is All I Ever

    Wanted :D
     
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    one love to thy Queeneth
    our sistas , our blk women
    indeed indeed !!!
     
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