Black Poetry : wanted you

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  1. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Purple McKinsee talks (relationship) reality...
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    she wanted you because...
    everyone else wanted you
    too...
    hell, i wanted a piece of
    you...
    to have and to hold
    you know...call you my own
    but...she had eyes for
    you...she wanted you
    for her own...too
    you were her unconquered
    mission...a trophy she had
    to have on the "mantle of men"

    i watch her devise her devious
    plan...to make you her
    man...

    and you went without kicking
    or screaming...
    fell into her woman trap
    sucked in
    devoured...
    you became her
    conquered...
    man

    now...when i sit in her
    living room
    talking about this...or that
    i scope out your man trophy
    atop her "mantle of men"...

    she...
    got you...

    (rough and off the cuff writing)

    MsDLite (c) 01.02
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sis, sis, sis....

    the "mantle of men".....a very cluttered space in some lovingrooms....

    speak on it sis! you know!

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O' my sistah Ms.D

    is there where she put me !! now i need dustin off.....

    Ms.D gurl u put yo foot into dis one and now u got
    me wondering coz we do fall fast in da woman trap!
    thank u 4 dis:heart: :kiss:
    H A P P Y NEW Y E A R RRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!:toast:
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    finally the truth from a blessed pen :rolling:

    i relate to this scribe for many times i have been that "trophy" but is just didn't go as easy as that brother :wink:

    this speaks volumes in it rawest form...

    5 mics poet...
     
  5. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    relationships...

    and all their risks...
    all their mysteries...
    for the right and wrong
    reasons...

    yet...
    we are engulfed by them
    ...some of us do the engulfing
    ...and for what?

    to add another notch to the bed post
    ...place another trophy on the mantle...in the case
    or a tick or star in a black book...

    those who genuinely know that they can
    give of themselves honestly (love unconditionally)...
    are eclisped by those who have other
    intentions...

    thanks for reading...poets! :) you all are my encouragement...

    watch yourself out there~
     
  6. OneTyme.

    OneTyme. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feeling this

    It's like you know first
    hand of all the tricks
    that are played by people
    in relationships and I myself
    have played them and been
    played. So I can feel this.
    Apreciate the nice read
    my sister. Keep speaking
    the truth.
     
  7. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    One...

    stay positive and
    be true as someone
    will be true to you...

    thanks, poet!

    my offering on the table~
     
  8. Ashante

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    Men!

    Das all I say on dis!
     
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    EbonyQueen06 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was type I hope to see your reccent writting
     
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    Yes, this was tyte, I wonder where this poet is now?
     
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