Black Poetry : WANT

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Jan 2, 2009.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Want someone
    That loves to hold

    Ready for what ever
    Speak the truth

    Down with whatever
    Willing to shape

    Form a world
    Two can be comfortable in
    As lovers, as companions, as long life friends

    Want someone
    That has a plan

    With room for improvement
    Some laughter at hand

    Someone who will let you
    Come up on a whim

    An impulse
    A wish
    A wild desire

    Take part
    In what is fashioned
    Not afraid to live.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    can't see you not getting it .....9 out of 10 ya want is right in front of you
    trust me this was well on point for the takens ........get ready and keep expressing
     
  3. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks $$RICH$$
    I think this is gonna be the first I have ever claimed as a favorite
    This one comes real...all that is needed is someone " Not afraid to live. "
     
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    ready2chat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You Are Not Alone

    I feel you
    I am there too
     
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    that's what i'm talking 'bout...

    ...WANT someone i can drop by on...on a whim...without all the drama of, YOU SHOULDA CALLED FIRST. I COULDA HAD MY OTHER MAN OVA HEA. WE AIN'T DOWN LIKE DAT.:)

    sorry 'bout that.

    feeling ya on dis hea
     
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    sweet apple*pie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was excellent sentiment. This flow gets me excited about the possibilities of a love as lovely as this.
     
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    Hodee...

    I lovedided this...

    It's everyone's wish to find that one person who can
    bring to the table something extra than what we have
    to offer for ourselves....
    And in that hope, we continue to search & wait until it happens.

    In the meantime....we dream.

    a sincere and lovely peace/piece


    epiphany:heart:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You know, the ending ofthis piece made me think of the things that happen to us, that do make us afraid to live. They are those things that make us afraid of getting hurt, not to take away from the whole of your piece, which was so earnest. I wish you find such a person brother, so much in this I'd like to find too. peace.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I feel ya bruh ...
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    it would be great to have "someone" like this

    they are out there brethren

    patience lion patience

    DEFINITELY FEELING YOU HERE

    :weights: