Black Poetry : Want

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thatgirl74, May 4, 2006.

  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I play over and over in my head all the things you
    just told me.
    I find that I put your words on repeat because
    they feel so good and who knows when you will
    say it again.
    It is amazing how easily my body responds to
    thoughts your words evoke.
    I thought that it was just the physical chemistry
    I was addicted to.
    I thought that I could handle it, move on,
    show no signs of need or want.
    What happened? How did I get here?
    How did I get to the point that you
    were more than a thing for me?

    Was it when I watched u walk out the door
    or was when I saw u with her?
    Could it have been the moment I first saw u
    Vowing to have u at whatever cost
    But it cost me dearly, near every being of me
    the moment u toched me, kissed me, hugged me....
    Oh the agnony of defeat, betrayed by my body
    so desperatelly needind, wanting, needing, wanting, neeeeeeddddding,
    wwwaaannnntttiiing...

    So I play over and over in my head all the things u just told me.
    the fact that u want her instead of me....that’s what ur really saying
    The fact that we had good times together wasn't enuf, but u think I'm a
    great FREIND.
    I thought that I could handle it, move on, show no signs of need or want.
    But u underestimate me, my FREIND
    for I will have u... no matter what.

    Because I know that you want me 2 that in
    my arms and my bed you are all to happy
    Yeah you will be mine and you will love me
    to the depths of the love I have for you
    Wow I slipped I let you know and now
    I need to roll cause I can't take it no more.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaaaaaaaa!
    letting it be known from da heart
    i c u thatgirl74
     
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    mistaliberator Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    girl you are still apart of me everyday process and i feel every piece of this you can call me at 910 8601468
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love how you put it down poet flo on.:terrific:
     
  5. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$R$$ as usual Love and Respect all the feedback. Thanks
    Nevar thank glad you are feeling me.
    :smooch: Mista wow like a breath of fresh air I am glad to be a part of that and will get at ya.
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DATZ RITE MY SISTAH
    LET A BRATHA KNO HOW U FEEL
    AND HE GON TAKE U BAK...LOL
    NICE RITE I WAZ FEELIN DA COMMAND..LOL


    BLACKLUV AND BP
     
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    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW u did ya thing fa real!!! I liked this my sistah!
     
  8. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank Ya Ghetto and Blatina for the love and feed back.
    :jumping: