Black Poetry : want

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Nov 14, 2002.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i want him
    i want to meet him in a coffee shop and lose myself in his banter
    i want to smile and catch his eye and flirt my way inside his mind
    i want to brush his shoulder with my hand and feel our electricity on my fingertips
    i want to "accidently" slide my foot up his leg under the table and
    giggle and say oops...
    i want him
    i want him to suggest that we take a walk in the park
    i want him to take my hand as soon as we can't be seen by public
    i want him to steal kisses under the willow tree
    i want him to guide me into the vacant barn and pull me into an embrace
    our hearts would race
    ooooh i want him
    i want him to quench the fire that burns below
    i want him to lay me down on the hay and get between my legs
    and i want him to talk real dirty to me...
    i want to say things in his ear
    i want him
    i want him to kiss my neck
    i want him to vibrate with my pleasure
    i want him to make me breathe hard and fast
    i want him to explode and then again...
    i want him.
    i want to stop wanting him.
     
  2. Blkthunder

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  3. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Now this is hot and well written
    The unspoken is a world in and of itself
    If only we could read minds
     
  4. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blkthunder... thanks

    shaz... right!? :spinstar:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Flower~

    This was Definitely the JoNeS portrayed to the fullest!!! Lovin every line of it!!!

    Reas
     
  6. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks reason... i'm comin at one subject from all angles...
    tryin to make my mind WORK... :spinstar:
     
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    wildflower...you and i think alike...i liked this piece...get outta my head!
     
  8. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    redlady... YOU get outta MY head!!! :spinstar:
     
  9. tbone5769

    tbone5769 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    douse the flame

    Yo! this is a hot piece, dont know who's in who's head, but it is a pleasure to have read..inside the thoughts that pleasure seems real intense....Im digging this!
     
  10. alyce

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    "I want to stop wanting him"

    I dig...

    (writing is good release, yes?) :heart:

    alyce