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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by queentswana, Jan 14, 2005.

  1. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I need two strong arms, to hold me tight
    when I need to be held ...late at night.
    :hearts1: :spinstar: :hearts1:
    Whisper you love me, with your tongue in my ear
    and everything else ...I might want to hear.
    :hearts1: :spinstar: :hearts1:
    My body aches, for a gentle touch
    It's one of the things, I miss so much.
    :hearts1: :spinstar: :hearts1:
    Your ears will hear me, moan and groan
    as you love me "up" ..."down" to the bone.
    :hearts1: :spinstar: :hearts1:
    I wanna dance to your music, sway to the beats
    my body works wonders ...under the sheets.

    :spinstar: ~and~ :spinstar:

    This fire inside me, burns to know end
    and I'm willing and able ...to try love again.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was beautiful your pen continues to take me in awe
    loving ya poetic flava as always tyte sista
     
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    tyte scribe sis...time will always mend...word
    one love
    khasm
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmm mmm mmm....

    I am loving this poem...
    it was overflowing with passion
    and the passion was backstroking
    in an ocean of love...

    and the words were like a tidal wave
    to the heart...

    ...mine even skipped a beat, at the thought

    Beautiful My sister...Beautiful!
     
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    OldSoul Permanent Black Man PREMIUM MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this one i love dearly what a awesome write
    i had to read it and say again your awesome
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen, you found your way in this.

    You... at your very best!
     
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